Wednesday, January 2, 2008

I am searching MYSELF, please come to me..!!

Needs, wants and desires,
Burning you and me like fire.
But deep inside the feeling
‘I’ am feeling
Why only ‘I’?
Why I and only I?

You are known
Of the ‘I’ you belong.
The suffering, the pain, the wounds
Is of that ‘I’ you belong.
Same are the feelings
Of ‘I’ies around you.
Understand it
They could be one of you.

‘My’ needs, ‘My’ wants and ‘My’ desires,
Are tiny and narrow
To ‘our’ needs, ‘our’ wants and ‘our’ desires.
Like a bereft arrow
In shadows and unstoppable flows
Cutting every single throat.
Protect yourself and learn this war,
Or we’ll be distant and far.

I want to simplify
This ‘I’
Juxtapose it with surrounded ‘I’ies
And got only one single reply,
I am still searching you,
I am still learning you.

Shall I desire for Myself
And kill the rest’s?
Or live for the Rest
And kill myself?
Ohh it’s scratching me, it’s burning me.
I am searching you Myself,
Please come to Me..!!

4 comments:

Amit Tiwari अमित तिवारी said...

Absolutely fabulous! I must say these tiny alphabets penned as poem reminds me of what Nietzsche puts 'gazing into abyss while abyss gazes you', whilst as Sartre moans, 'the other is hell'. Au contraire this poetess successfully breaches the limitations of language in the eternal quest of being & the 'I' seems to be vanishing withing her. Keep writing. Bravo!

Unknown said...

amazing...............aur kya kahunnnnnn awsm..........nice keep it up.......

Vikas Gupta said...

Wow! Liked the angst!

IIBIR said...

Thanks for all of your comments..

Regards.